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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Such a great start. Definitely sets a dark tone and leaves me eager for more! 🖤

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

I swear I see you in every single comment section of everything I read. Am I following you or are you reading my mind lol.

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Reading your mind 😇

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

I knew it lol

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Andrew Taylor's avatar

“could not be told on account of its inscrutable shape and many members”

love this description

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Admin Cole26's avatar

super dope. please finish the book and release it. or post as you go. wanna read more. restacked.

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

What an opener! Super interesting and violent start without it seeming over done. The tone is somber with a hint of gore, and I thought you weaved this well.

Your writing itself is poetic.

All in all, I enjoyed it :)

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Joseph Grayer's avatar

Thank you so much, that means a lot! I definitely will.

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